A complaint was filed March 5th against Pittsburgh Steelers QB Ben Roethlisberger for sexual assault on a 20 year old college student. The incident took place in a restroom stall in Capital City nightclub in Georgia. The women went to the hospital and doctors found small laceration and bruising along with male DNA, however this wasn't strong enough evidence to hold Ben. Charges have been dropped.
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http://www.usatoday.com/sports/football/nfl/steelers/2010-04-12-ben-roethlisberger-fred-bright_N.htm
Grade: 7.5/10
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• Spell out quarterback
• Should be 20-year-old
• This is a run-on sentence: The women went to the hospital and doctors found small laceration and bruising along with male DNA, however this wasn't strong enough evidence to hold Ben.
• Refer to people by last names in news stories