Thursday, April 8, 2010

Jack's new Album

Jack Johnson

1820 Raleigh Road

Public on sale date: June 1st



Jack Johnson first picked up his guitar at the age of 14 and has being a legendary musician for close to ten years with has 6 albums with a seventh on its way. Jack Johnson is going to performing in Somerset, WI. Presale tickets will be available April 6th and public tickets will be available April 10th.

Jack Johnson grew up in Oahu, Hawaii performs alternative surf music. In his upcoming concert he will be performing a few songs from his old albums like "Banana Pancakes and Upside Down", along with his new album. Jack Johnson is one of four men in the band. You can see many of their performances on youtube or myspace etc.
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6 comments:

  1. Very well written press release. You did a great job covering Jack Johnson.

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  2. I didnt know that much about Jack. My cousin has his CDs and loves them! Im sure that it wont be long till i grab one myself!

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  3. I like the amount of information you gave the readers. It would have been nice to get a photo of him and his band members to grab our eyes though.

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  4. I agree, the information you gave about Jack Johnson was very good. Your audience is going to want a reason to listen to him. Good job.

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  5. The information on Jack Johnson was very interesting. I've listened to him for a long time and his music, to me, is amazing. Good job on this press release!

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  6. Grade: 4.5/10
    • The contact information isn't complete or set up like your textbook advised on page 512.
    • Poor wording: with has
    • The first sentence is a run-on sentence and should be divided up into several others.
    • Should be 10
    • Should be six
    • Should be Somerset, Wis.
    • Should be April 6 and April 10
    • You're missing words in this sentence: Jack Johnson grew up in Oahu, Hawaii performs alternative surf music.
    • Should be You Tube and MySpace.
    * You included a chunk of good information in this press release.

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