The brother of figure skater Nancy Kerrigan's is accused of murdering their 70 year old father in his Massachusetts home. After Mark (son) and Danial (father) got into a violent argument over a phone call Mark said that he put his hands around his father's neck and he just fell to the floor. After cops arrested Mark from his home in Boston, MA he plead not guilty to all charges, despite cruetial evidence.
Danial's wife says he died of a heart attack and there was nothing suspicious about his death. After looking at Marks extensive criminal record he was put in jail until he made bail in 2007. Sources say he is very distraught over his fathers death and is seeking treatment for Post-Traumatic-Stress-Disorder and seeing a psychiatrist.
http://www.usatoday.com/sports/olympics/2010-01-25-kerrigan-death_N.htm?loc=interstitialskip
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• Kerrigan doesn't need a possessive "s"
• Missing hyphen in 70-year-old father
• Missing comma after call
• Should be arrested at his home not from his home
• Should be Boston, Mass.
• Cruetial is a misspelling
• Missing possessive apostrophe in Mark's
• What do you mean "until he made bail in 2007"? Didn't this just happen?
• Missing possessive apostrophe in father's
• Post Traumatic Stress Disorder doesn't need hyphens