Thursday, February 18, 2010
Obituaries- Eddy Thompson
Eddy M. Thompson age 2 of Chisago City was sent to the South Shore veterinary clinic where he passed late Thursday afternoon. Eddy was a young playful cat who loved to cuddle, climb trees and chase squirrels. Eddy leaves behind best friend Sami and five family members. He will be missed by many. Services will be held Saturday at 10 a.m. in the Thompson's yard.
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While it's never fun reading an obituary, I think you did a good job bringing out the character of Eddy. He seems like he was a great cat.
ReplyDeleteI'm so sorry to read of your loss. Did Eddy fall from a tree? Did he somehow contract feline leukemia?
ReplyDeleteInteresting take on your obituary. Most people wrote about there own death as you wrote about your cat's death. Pretty creative.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kyle, very creative. I thought it was very well written and seemed to describe Eddy perfectly.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! It was quite believable!
ReplyDeleteVery nice, but even for a cat I crave more detail. What breed, color, simple stuff.
ReplyDeleteGrade: 9/10
ReplyDeleteMistakes
• Missing commas before and after age 2
• The V and C in Veterinary Clinic should be capitalized because they're part of a proper name.